For Several Short Sentences about Writing, Klinkenborg adopts a format that resembles poetry. For example:
Examine the distance between sentences. Some lie close together, making small steps forward. Others seem to stand well apart from each other, Advancing the piece discontinuously.
At first, it’s a little jarring. Klinkenborg doesn’t explain his technique until page 55:
Make your prose look less familiar. Turn every sentence into its own paragraph.
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What happens?
A sudden, graphic display of the length of your sentences. And, better yet, their relative length – how it varies, or doesn’t vary, from one to the next. Variation is the life of prose, in length and in structure.
“I’ve been teaching writing for a long time, and I’ve looked through a lot of writing books,” Klinkenborg said.
“They…